Error & Denial - part 1

Mon, 24 Apr 2006 22:52:51 GMT

A Cautionary Tale

Hello Mr. Denial
Hello Ms. Error

(This is my first 'published' story anywhere
so be gentle ;)

What brings my favorite Hag to this lair, Huh?
(sotto voce) as if I didn't know ;)
Same thing as you - Pussy.
Liar. You lie through your teeth.
Never. Never Ever :)
Infamous Hag is out for pussy?
You got it!
(laughs) You really are crazy.
Got that too.
Anyways, I'm not here for Pussy.
You aren't! Now who's lying?
Cunt, it's called cunt, Nyle.
Such language young lady!
Fuck! You don't say Pussy.
Never Ever?
Cunt, it's cunt!
OK, but ...
But what?
I love you calling me on it ;)

You want a family Nyle?
You know it.
When?
1985 - My eldest is 16,
in a couple of years I'll be taking him out
for some Elderberry wine.
Be Serious
I am, Deadly Serious.
You've completely given up.
Look Air, I really don't want to discuss this again, OK?
Oh So Touchy.
It's a raw nerve. You know it is.
Yeah - slam the door on happiness
just like that.
That's very unfair.
It's not - you have no good reason.
OK lets do the maths again, you sadist bitch:
Have a child when, in two years?
Be 60 when they turn 18
what sort of joke is that !?
PPL have started older than you.
I know they have;
Jack and Mary down the street,
BUT I CHOOSE NOT TO.
Why?
It's too damned old, thats why!
Lets see, the youngest;
They get to have their first drink with Dad
when he's a pensioner.
What larks pip, what larks!
These are just words, Nyle
words that make no sense.
They make a lot of very good sense Air!
You're afraid.
Yes!
Of what?
(flatly) Of being dead.
How original.
(with passion)
Of being dead with children,
children who won't have a father.
Of leaving a wife behind to fend for herself.
IT'S BAD
IT''S ALL BAD
GET IT THROUGH YOUR STUPID HEAD
AND SHUT THE FUCK UP

Think outside the box
I'd prefer to be thinking inside the box - here cunty cunty.
I would be your wife.
You! You!!
Hey, that's what I need! a 100% lesbian wife!!
I'm not all gay
OK 90%, 95% who's counting?
I want your children.
Oh fuck it - Get outta here.
(softly) I mean it.
And what do I do for sex huh?
Rely on wifey for a once a month mercy fuck,
while we both go out and play?
I DON'T THINK SO!
Don't shout.
You are fucking with my worst wounds,
I have every right to shout.
You don't believe me?
No I don't!
You will.
OK I'm outta here. Nice one, Air!
Nyle cries for a hour or two
what-the-fuck do you care.
I care.
I'm going.
bi bi
Nup, butch as bark. Goodbye you goddamn bitch.
Your bitch.
FUCK! (sighs) just fuck.

You would make a wonderful father.
Please don't do this ... Please!
Just listen to me.
NO !
Just listen ONCE
you owe me that.
(unintelligible)
You get two for the price of one.
What?
Wives!
Oh (pause)
Oh I see - a trinity with a Hot Bi Babe,
How original is that !?
(snarling sarcasm) Air's deep thought - get a HBB!!
(quietly) That hurts me.
Not as much as me babe,
it's ridiculous!
No it's not - we are not a couple, Nyle.
You got that right.
Just friends.
Not tonight we're not.
We are friends.
(silence)
Our third will be the loved one,
the brightest star of the three.
Do I have to listen to this?
Yes you do!
It's pure torture and it's vicious.
It's the truth.
I don't trust you,
not at all.
I know that you want to live alone,
in misery. and I won't let you.
You won't win Air
not this one.
Just watch me:
You get two for one;
two resourceful women.
Even if you die
we'll do just fine.
(very flat) Ouch, double ouch.
And we tell the kids
how much we loved their Daddy.
You're serious.
Deadly serious.
I want to vomit.
Be my guest ... Daddy!

You despise cowardice:
Your brother - never had a woman,
jumped the first guy
who got his cock out.
Don't bring Tom into this !!
I'm not- I'm calling you a hypocrite.
Look who's talking.
OK Insult me,
but you still don't win.
This isn't a war!
Yes it is Nyle;
It's a fight:
Our fight, for the future.

No money, no house, no car,
It won't work.
You have money.
I DON'T !!
You have your business.
It's on life support.
Because you don't try.
I don't want to try -got it!
Gotcha. I've gotcha.

Her name is Kerrie and she'd love to meet us.
Second name Packer?
Oh you'll pack her ;)
Bitch !
Your bitch.

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